But the consumer pitch is a different thing. For consumers you need to lead with benefits that are very concrete. Being able to do that is still 6-12 months away.
It always blows my mind that consumers are so literal about software. It’s really hard for computer people to see things in that way.
So, assuming that what I have here is for tech bloggers, journalists, and computer professionals, do you think that all the points are accurate, that nothing important is missing, and that the language is effective? Suggestions welcome.